Script and Storyboard alterations

During the production process it became apparent that some of my scripted lines were impractical, so these were cut from the final production. Also, during filming I decided that some shots from storyboard would be better filmed with lots of different cuts.

Script;
The first section of scripting that I decided to remove was the non diegetic dialogue from the character Dan. This is because in my opinion theses lines were not important and specific to the narrative of the opening two minutes. I also decided to remove the voice over, I decided to do this because I felt that the voice over didn't fit the brainwashing feel, voice over is better suited to a remotely controlled subject.

However, to still imply the main narrative I added to the script during production. I added a section for Robert Browning during his speech, this was: "Hello everyone and welcome to the annual conservative party conference" "This year is going to be an exciting year for us and I'm hear to tell you all about it", I decided to add this diegetic dialogue because it informs the audience of Robert Brownings' occupation and reasons for his death.

Storyboard;
The only change to the storyboarding was adding further camera shots. I chose to do this to create more tension at points. For example the section that Jake finds the gun, I original storyboarded two different camera angles but during production I decided to use five camera shots to create more action feel to the sequence.